I use to love taco bell but they let me down

"on small like of meat"

I can't even begin to decipher what this was supposed to say.

I have noticed that toxic hell... Oops... I mean taco bell has had
quality issues over the years. But, you get what you pay for. I only
go there when i want something squeezed out of a tube onto a tortilla.


Overall your letter could use some improvement. If you are writing
them a letter to inform them that they have quality control issues,
then you need to be a little more articulate then the letter that you
have written. I do commend you in at least describing the problems,
but the letter reads more like a blog-rant then a business letter.

"wanna" "dumb coupons" "lowsey coupons" are not a reflection of a
well-written suggestion letter. Punctuation is also almost completely
absent in this letter. These letters are sent to the companies
themselves - and they should be written as business letters.

Last time I went through the drive through at Taco Bell, I ordered a
beef combo burrito without onions. After they handed me the bag, I
checked the burrito, and lo and behold, it had onions on it. So I
parked the car, went inside, and they gave me the right order, and I
didn't even have to use this web site! Imagine that.

And this is the reason why we should always double check our orders
BEFORE we leave the resturant.

another PFB mouth breather. let me guess, you want your money back
right?

as Ron White said "You can't fix stupid"

You want Taco Bell to "do something" other than give you coupons to
compensate for your messed-up order. What is that "something" you so
coyly are trying to get from Taco Bell? Free meals for a year? The
head of the manager of that location and the torture of all its
employees who might have made your order?

The company tried to make up for a be experience by giving you free
stuff. What more do you want and why do you think you are entitled to
it?

Are you her daughter? I think you are. You write just like she does.


If any of you don't know who Joyce is. She pops up from time to time,
when she's home from Mars, or Venus, or wherever it is she goes in
between letters. Let's just say, not only is she out there, but she
can't write worth a crap. Style is just like this letter.

Not good dear!

Peace!

Are your kids in school? Is so, I think it would be a good idea if you
joined them for an Engish class.

Wow...coupons aren't enough. Exactly what do you want then...maybe for
Taco Bell to comp you a family meal at a nice elegant sit down
restaurant?
Next time go look over the order BEFORE you drive leave the premises.
And tell them about it at that time.
I know how kids are but they must not have found it very bad if they
ate it anyway.
But I do see your point you want what you paid for.

Just walk in with your receipt and tell them you want your money back.
It does suck that you didn't get what you want, but you do have
options. Now you will also get those coupons in the mail so you can
check back and see if things have changed for free.

Or maybe they will send your kids to Disneyland because their Taco
Bell dinner was ruined one night. Good luck with that.

There are two commas. It's much more readable now that I've seen
that...

If compensating you for the sub par food isn't enough, what would be?

Cloth napkins? Tablecloth? Tableside wine service? After dinner
mints? Reserved seating? Finger bowls? Pay one of your mortgage
payments?

Just name it. You sound like one of our best customers.

You are a parent and this is how you write a business letter? I feel
sorry for your kids and the example you are setting for them.

In the time it took you to go to nasty Taco Bell, you could have made
your kids a couple of homemade quesadillas or some tacos. Delicious,
and if good quality ingredients are used, nutritious too. You could
even have the kids help you prepare them, and teach them a thing or
two about cooking a decent meal.

After watching this, I think it will be a LOOONG time before I eat at
TB OR KFC.

http://money.cnn.com/2007/02/23/news/companies/taco_bell/

Fried rats legs and a mouse fiesta taco are NOT my thing.

And as for it being your kids dinner, if the food was substandard, you
as the parent have an obligation to see that your children are
properly nourished. They are kids. They don't have the right to
refuse to eat ANYTHING you put before them.

So if your kids are so high maintenance that they can't/won't eat the
food you put before them, that's not on Taco Bell, that's on you as a
parent.

The fact that I think is Taco Bell is the lowest of the low on the
fast food food chain, you letter is NOT going to get anyone's
attention.
I'm going to give you some sage advice on how to get a company to at
the very least be able to understand what you are saying. That is to
use a spell/grtammar checker and of course punctuation. Your run on
sentence doesn't end.

I cannot believe you sent THIS to Taco Bell's corporation. Have you
ever attended school?

Not to mention, if you had a concern with the way they made your food,
you should have requested that they give you a new order made
properly.

Why are you feeding your kids Taco Bell? Don't you realize that the
meat they use is grade D?? It is dog food...and nasty. No wonder why
so many kids are overweight and their parents are too. You should be
happy this has turned you away from them. I cringe every time someone
tells me they eat at Taco Bell. It is loaded with calories and
everyone is fat that eats there I know.

uhh.. this whole pathetic letter is a run on sentence.

you know if your gonna write a letter too a corperation then you shuld
make sure everything is corect in speling and punktuation and grammer
if you dont then nobody is going to pay much attension too you at all
so rememmber too do this in the future it will make a tun of
differense and you wont get as much negitive feed back from other
peeple on hear just thout id let you no that so youll be better
prepaired the next time you rite a letter on this site and like others
said pleeze dont help your kids with there homewerk or they might grow
up to bee just like you

thank u and have a grate day

Do ... you ... know ... what ... a ... period ... is?

I'm scared for these kids.

What a lousy (note correct spelling) letter! Please don't help your
children with their homework.

As BellaSera asked, what more do you want besides the dumb coupons?
They tried to make it right.

This letter will go nowhere since you didn't even note a location.

Why don't you buy a quesadilla maker and make them yourself? You can
put all the meat you want in them.

You have kids? What happens when they need help with their homework?

What else would you like besides some "dumb coupons?"

Exhibit A: How to NEVER write a letter.